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The reader learns several things about Victor in the first paragraph. Victor speaks Spanish and English. Also, Victor would like to travel to France. This is the background information about Victor in the first paragraph.
BETTER:
The reader learns several things about Victor in the first paragraph. Victor speaks Spanish and English. This means that Victor’s family probably ____________________________. Also, Victor would like to travel to France. This shows that Victor probably ____________________________. The first paragraph gives a lot of important background information about Victor.
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