Objectives: I can revise my writing by working with a partner on word choice and ideas.
I can edit my writing by checking spelling, capitals and punctuation.
1. Log in to Google Docs and open your animal story.
2. Ask a partner to read it with you. You will also read theirs. You must suggest at least one thing to make the story better. This could be a more exciting word or an better way to say something.
3. Edit your writing by checking spelling, capitals and punctuation.
Use the Editing Checklist.
When you have finished, ask Mrs. Alvarado to read it.