{"id":1174,"date":"2020-03-15T22:11:23","date_gmt":"2020-03-16T02:11:23","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sobhn\/?p=1174"},"modified":"2020-03-15T22:11:24","modified_gmt":"2020-03-16T02:11:24","slug":"writing-pbw","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sobhn\/2020\/03\/15\/writing-pbw\/","title":{"rendered":"Writing- PBW"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Read the following drama about curiosity. Then answer the question that follows.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>We will continue Passage Based Writing on a weekly basis.&nbsp;<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>This week we will focus on <strong>The Crane Wife<\/strong>. It is uploaded below.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Complete a graphic organizer like the ones we did in class. Make sure to include 3 claims, quotes, explanation, and analysis\/reasoning.  If you are unsure please let me know.\u00a0<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Write essay: revise edit and then publish into google docs and share with me via email- sobhn@dearbornschools.org. You do not need to send me your annotations or graphic organizer for now but please save all your work. I only need a typed copy of the final PBW. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Due date- Friday, March 20th by 3:00 p.m.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong><em>Characters<\/em><\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong> Man Fisherman<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong> Woman<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong> Emperor <\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Crane<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>The Crane Wife<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>adapted from a Japanese tale by Kathleen Hollenbeck<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: There once lived a man who earned his living making charcoal for people to burn in their stoves. He worked hard, but he earned little money and was poor.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: I have labored my entire life and saved what little I could all these years. Finally, I have enough money to buy a sleeping mattress. No longer will I sleep on the bare floor!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: The next day, the man set out for the market. He walked down the long, dusty road toward town.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>(He comes upon a fisherman who has trapped a crane in his fishing net.)<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Fisherman<\/strong>: Ha! Ha! Ha! Look at that gawky crane, struggling to free herself from my sturdy net! She\u2019ll never break loose! Ha! Ha! Ha!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: Young man! Let that bird free!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Fisherman<\/strong>: (<em>laughing<\/em>) It\u2019s just a bird. What do you care?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: That bird has done nothing to you. <em>(He reaches into his pocket.) <\/em>Look; here is the money I have saved to buy myself a mattress. I will give you this money in exchange for the crane\u2019s freedom. Take my money and release her.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>(The fisherman takes the money and sets the crane free. The crane immediately soars to the sky and flies away.)<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: <em>(to himself as he walks back home) <\/em>All my savings are gone. I have worked hard, and yet I have nothing to show for it. <em>(He smiles.) <\/em>The crane is free, though! What a beautiful, glorious bird!<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: That night, the man heard a knock at his door. When he opened the door, there stood a stunning young woman.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: May I help you?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>1<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>ENGLISH LANGUAGE ARTS<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Woman<\/strong>: I wish to be your wife.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: Why would you want to marry me?<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Woman<\/strong>: I have seen that you are kind and gentle. I know you have worked hard, and it\u2019s time someone cared for you. I want to do that.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: I would be honored to call you my wife.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: For years, the man and his wife lived in happiness together. She became a loving wife and cared for him. He wished only that he had more money so he could buy her beautiful clothes and provide a more comfortable home.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: <em>(sitting by the fireplace) <\/em>I wish I had more money to provide for you.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Woman<\/strong>: Perhaps I can help you, my dear husband. I must go into that little room and close the<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>door. I will be in there for hours, and you must promise me not to open the door.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: Whatever you wish, I will do.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: Hours passed, and his wife finally came out of the room. In her arms she carried the finest white fabric ever made.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Woman<\/strong>: Take this fine cloth to the Emperor. He will pay you handsomely for it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: The man met with the Emperor the next day.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Emperor<\/strong>: <em>(He admires the cloth.) <\/em>This is the most beautiful cloth I\u2019ve ever seen! Here, take this money in exchange. <em>(He pays the man.)<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: Several years pass.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: <em>(sitting by the fire again) <\/em>With the money we got for the cloth, we built a fine home, enjoyed plenty of food and bought nice clothes. But now the money has run out, and I have no way to replace it.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Woman<\/strong>: Once again, I will go into that little room and close the door. I will be in there for several hours, but remember . . . you must promise me not to open the door.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: Again, hours passed and the wife came out with fine cloth. Again, the man took it to the Emperor and came home with a sack full of coins. The man and his wife lived on this money for quite some time. Eventually, the money again ran out, and the man felt despair.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Woman<\/strong>: If it will please you, I will make some more cloth.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>(She goes into the little room and closes the door.)<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Man<\/strong>: I am curious to know how my wife makes that beautiful cloth. What can she possibly use to spin such exquisite fabric? Surely one little peek will not hurt.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Narrator<\/strong>: The man cracked open the door, and to his surprise, there stood the beautiful white crane he had saved so long ago.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Crane<\/strong>: <em>(sadly) <\/em>Yes, it is I, the crane you once saved. I became your wife that night to thank you for saving my life. Now that you have discovered my secret, I can no longer stay here.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><em>(She flies out an open window. The man rushes outside, calling after her.)<\/em><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>2<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>Passage-based Writing Prompt Student Responses<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p><strong>In the drama, the Fisherman and the Emperor are minor characters.Write an essay analyzing how the Fisherman and the Emperor are important to the development of a theme of the drama. Use evidence from the drama to support your response.<\/strong><\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>You may reference the passage as often as you need.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Remember, a well-written essay:<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 shows understanding of the text<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 uses details from the text for support<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 is organized with an introduction and conclusion<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 uses transitions and clear language<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>\u2022 follows rules of spelling, punctuation, and grammar<br><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Read the following drama about curiosity. Then answer the question that follows. We will continue Passage Based Writing on a weekly basis.&nbsp; This week we will focus on The Crane Wife. It is uploaded below. Complete a graphic organizer like the ones we did in class. 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