{"id":1254,"date":"2020-04-29T07:20:00","date_gmt":"2020-04-29T11:20:00","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/?p=1254"},"modified":"2020-04-28T16:03:03","modified_gmt":"2020-04-28T20:03:03","slug":"feedback-for-the-glass-castle-assignment","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/2020\/04\/29\/feedback-for-the-glass-castle-assignment\/","title":{"rendered":"Feedback for The Glass Castle Assignment"},"content":{"rendered":"\n<p>Growing up, I was a book worm.  I remember my dad reading Sesame Street and making voices for Count Dracula and Cookie Monster.  My mom, so fiercely proud of her culture, would read nursery rhymes in French.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/i.ytimg.com\/vi\/qht6VLFTbaY\/hqdefault.jpg\" alt=\"Sesame Street | The Count Meets Cookie Monster - YouTube\"\/><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>I graduated to reading <em>Babysitter&#8217;s Club<\/em> and <em>Nancy Drew<\/em>.  In middle school, my favorite authors were Joan Lowrey Nixon, Caroline B. Cooney, and Lois Lowry.  I read <em>The Giver<\/em> more times than I can count. Much to my mother&#8217;s horror, I delved into the fantastical worlds created by<em> <\/em>R.L. Stine and Christopher Pike, when she desperately wanted me to read classic novels by Charles Dickens and Jane Austen.  I discovered author L.J. Smith (of the famed <em>Vampire Diaries<\/em>) and inhaled every book she wrote.  My favorite English teachers, Mr. Schusterbauer and Mr. Gruber, introduced me to Alice Hoffman and <em>Wuthering Heights<\/em> respectively.  In college, I discovered romance novels and may have failed a couple of science courses because I was reading Nora Roberts or Linda Howard, instead of studying for physics and microbiology.   I finally tolerated Shakespeare due to my eccentric teacher Mr. Michael Rex.    <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I have books in every room of my house.  And I will confess &#8211; I would rather pick up a familiar favorite, then try a new book.  I will be the first to share that I like what I like &#8211; and that my closed-mindset is definitely prohibitive of me being as knowledgeable as I&#8217;d like to be about works of literature.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<figure class=\"wp-block-image\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/www.rd.com\/wp-content\/uploads\/2019\/11\/shutterstock_509582812-e1574100998595.jpg\" alt=\"Bestselling Books of the Decade | Reader's Digest\"\/><\/figure>\n\n\n\n<p>As a teacher, I have the privilege\/responsibility of sharing different texts with my students.  If I could change anything about the Language Arts curriculum, it would be to return to reading.  However, it is what it is, and I do the best I can. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>When our continued remote learning plan was approved, we had eight weeks remaining of the 2019-2020 school year.  I pushed to share Elie Wiesel&#8217;s Holocaust memoir <em>Night<\/em> with my students &#8211; but was advised against it due to the topic and emotional labor of reading such a heavy text. (Needless to say, I was disappointed.) The Language Arts department instead decided to offer students a different short story every week. The reader in me was thrilled &#8211; because finally we had an opportunity to expose our kids to worthy texts.  (But you should still read <em>Night<\/em> one day soon!)<\/p>\n\n\n\n<div class=\"wp-block-image\"><figure class=\"aligncenter\"><img decoding=\"async\" src=\"https:\/\/blogs.bu.edu\/guidedhistory\/files\/2013\/05\/tumblr_lp0th8qbiX1qkmxbvo1_500.jpg\" alt=\"The Front Cover of Elie Wiesel's \u201cNight\u201d | Guided History\"\/><figcaption>The cover of Wiesel&#8217;s memoir of Night<\/figcaption><\/figure><\/div>\n\n\n\n<p>Our first short story was an excerpt from Jeanette Walls&#8217; memoir <em>The Glass Castle<\/em>.  I don&#8217;t typically read memoirs &#8211; but read this entire memoir last summer.  Walls&#8217; superior use of pathos to emotionally manipulate her readers is alarmingly effective.  As a writer, I was excited to share Walls&#8217; writing with our students. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>I mean, look at the first line, &#8220;I was on fire. It&#8217;s my earliest memory.&#8221;  Immediately the reader has questions.  How old was she? Why was she on fire?   <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>Of course, as teachers, we have to ask students questions to engage their thinking with the story.  Below I will breakdown some of the biggest gaps from the work submitted last week. <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p style=\"background-color:#f7e361\" class=\"has-background\">#6:  <strong>The word \u201csinged\u201d most nearly means<\/strong>:  I could tell many students did not go back to the text to read the question.  One of the most common responses for this question was &#8220;Singed most likely means to sing lyrics&#8221;  First of all, the past tense of sing, is sung.  And here is the line from the text, &#8220;I screamed. I smelled the burning and heard a horrible crackling as the fire <strong>singed<\/strong> my hair and eyelashes.&#8221;  Had they gone back to the text they could have used <em>context clues<\/em> to figure out that singed means to burn slightly.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p style=\"background-color:#fcfe8f\" class=\"has-background\">#10:<strong> &#8221; Afterward, a nurse asked me if I was okay. &#8220;Of course,&#8221; I said.  I told here I didn&#8217;t care if I had some silly old scar.  That was good, she said, because from the look of it, I had other things to worry about.&#8221; <\/strong>  A lot of students missed where the nurse was coming from with her statement.  This was a really good example of reading, or implicit understanding of the text.  A lot of students didn&#8217;t understand that Walls&#8217; perception of her reality is very different from the medical professionals taking care of her. Remembering that the incident was being retold from the perspective of a child helps in explaining the unawareness of said child.<\/p>\n\n\n\n<p style=\"background-color:#eed86c\" class=\"has-background\">Even the way Walls&#8217; chooses to end this chapter, &#8220;&#8216;You don&#8217;t have to worry anymore, baby,&#8217; Dad said. &#8216;You&#8217;re safe now.'&#8221;  How do we define &#8220;safety&#8221;?  Everyone reading this excerpt can&#8217;t help but worry about the three year old.  <\/p>\n\n\n\n<p>If you enjoyed the excerpt, you can access the whole novel <a href=\"https:\/\/www.houstonisd.org\/cms\/lib2\/TX01001591\/Centricity\/Domain\/17638\/The_Glass_Castle.pdf\">here<\/a>.  Between you and me, I enjoyed Walls&#8217; true-life novel about her mother&#8217;s upbringing <em><a href=\"https:\/\/www.goodreads.com\/book\/show\/6366437-half-broke-horses\">Two Broke Horses<\/a><\/em>  immensely!! I literally could not put that novel down!  Thanks for reading. &#8211; SMS<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Growing up, I was a book worm. I remember my dad reading Sesame Street and making voices for Count Dracula and Cookie Monster. My mom,&#8230;<\/p>\n<div class=\"more-link-wrapper\"><a class=\"more-link\" href=\"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/2020\/04\/29\/feedback-for-the-glass-castle-assignment\/\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\">Feedback for The Glass Castle Assignment<\/span><\/a><\/div>\n","protected":false},"author":1798,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[1],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-1254","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-blogs","entry"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1254","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1798"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=1254"}],"version-history":[{"count":2,"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1254\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":1256,"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/1254\/revisions\/1256"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=1254"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=1254"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/iblog.dearbornschools.org\/sabbaghela\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=1254"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}